Trailer Ë Thunderclaw (Alien Warrior, #2) PDF by ☆ Penelope Fletcher Welp 3 stars I don t know if I m too harsh because I waitedso longor what I think the build up was too much for me Let me splain I m going to start by talking about the editing Dear god, it was just bad So bad Bad bad Words in mixed up places, homonyms instead of the correct words In one instance, a character is replaced for another so I had backtrack to make sure who was actually doing what Now, I m not a writer Look at the mess I write Not great My grammar is atrocious Sentence structure I don t think so ButThere had to be a person, someone, anyone who would go over the material and point some things out The very obvious ones I volunteer I would seriously do it in a heartbeat because, while I m disappointed in some portions of this book, the imagination that made this world is flipping awesome Also, I still want to know what happens next and my love for Ven Life as a single parent is hard Working two jobs, no support from the dead beat sperm donor, deciding which bills get paid and which can wait, and a pending birthday for her daughter leaves Sine with barely enough energy to function Maybe that s why hallucinating an alien king has come to take her to his planet as his Queen seems so real Wait There really is an alien in her home and he does want her as his One And Only Mate So what s a girl to do but run Hassabard Gengorye ThunderClaw, great Alpha of all Veraks, concerns over finding a female to rival Lumen are put to rest when he finds a red haired vixen that is everything he s ever dreamed of She even practices his planet s age old tradition that requires him to prove his worthiness in the bride war chase Though giving him a fine chase, in the end he prevails thus making her, her cub, kin his ThunderClaw and High Commander Eor What Does This Woman Want S Ne Is A Hot Mess A Broke Single Mother Who Learned Alpha Men Are Abusive Monsters, She Gave Up On The Fallacy Of True Love Long Ago So Upon Meeting The King Of All Alphas And The Commander Of All Bad Asses Who Profess Everlasting Adoration, She Runs Screaming Literally Talked Into Hosting The Unusual Out Of Town Visitors By Her Family, She Discovers King Beowyn Is Overbearing, Vain, Selfish, And Belligerent Just Like She Suspected But He Makes Her Laugh, And Her Troubled Daughter Sleeps Peacefully In His Arms His Perpetual Shadow Eorik Is Broody, Self Righteous And An Annoying Know It All Yet His Touch Is Gentle, He Acts As If Her Word As Gospel, And Her Daughter Thinks He S The Second Coming Her Broken Belief The Opposite Sex Can Be Strong, Caring And Trustworthy Is Reforged, And Sine Takes A Chance On The Beautiful Life They Promise Then Lands On The Verak Home Planet And Faces An Ugly Surprise Six Hundred StrongWho Does This Warrior King Desire Planning To Take A Quick Trip To Earth For A Feisty Nubile To Bed, Beowyn Finds Himself In A Quandary When His Chosen Human Makes It Clear He Will Share Her Bed And No Other Wanting Her For His Own, He Omits A Trifling Truth To Get Her To His Home Planet On The Journey His Vessel Is Attacked By Vengeful L Odo, And They Crash On A Forbidden Planet Rescue By His Ra Allies Is Swift, But Two Of Their Party Remain Lost In The Dangerous Wilds Beowyn Must Decide To Return To Vayhalun In Time To Retain The Right To Be Known As The Great Alpha, Or Stay To Lead The Search For His Missing Loved Ones, Forfeiting A Throne His Mighty Dyna Has Held For AeonsWhat Does This Protector Dream Of Eorik Is In Love With A Male He Cannot Have He Finds Solace In Protecting Beowyn And Doesn T Complain When He Flits Off On Foolhardy Adventures That Is Until They Travel To Earth And Eorik Finds His One The Same Female His Liege Is Adamant Is His Struggling With The Pain Of Watching Those He Loves From A Distance, He Finds Himself Stranded On A Planet Of Both Paradise And Peril, Protecting The Most Innocent Of Those He Cherishes He And The Human Babe Rush To Reunite With Their Convoy As A Nameless Terror Stalks Them Through The Jungle From the reviews, it seems unconvincing The H s world is an open marriage, bisexual hedonistic society that the h a down on her luck girl says yes to just to escape her situation on Earth But later when she falls for the H, h tries to kill his favourite concubine one of hundreds and wants him to end his harem but H wants h to apologise to his concubine who had been blowing him It all leaves a bad taste in one s mouth h seems a hypocrite and accepted H on false pretences And as for the H, I have no idea why romance authors insist on writing a committed HEA for guys like these just let him enjoy his harem The End.
Not for me.
I really wanted to give this a 5 star rating but in the endI just couldn t.
For me, Venomous is hard to beat Let me just say that Sine was no Lumen.
How did Beowyn find Sine I found it hard to believe that he just randomly saw her in a restaurant and knew right away Did her have to search the whole plantet I did quite enjoy Sine s family thoughPatrick, Fergus, Aled, Rowan and little Fergie.
I am so team Eorik The way he took care of Fergie when they were stranded Him changing her diaper totally had me cracking up And the way he cares for Beowyn is just so heartbreaking.
I wanted Sine to beopen to her feelings for Beowyn She was a little difficult to love as a character One thing that made me quite uncomfortable is when view spoiler she ha 3.
25 stars Verse is still fascinating The world building is pretty impressive and continues to expand as Veraks Beowyn and orik go on the quest to find Beowyn s One When they meet S ne pronounced Shee na , that s when the WTFery and eventually romance, happens The adventure spans the verse from Earth to their home planet, Vayhalun and I did love the ride and getting to learnabout the lusty Veraks Not a standalone This picks up immediately after events of Venomous, and Lumen and her R males feature pretty heavily in this installment, as the overarching storyline is the strongest asset to this book Romances that are 1 1 1 happy me It s a triad, which I love This is a MMF type menage, so the sexuality is fluid, the world itself is all about embracing the differences and not judging how people come together, no pun intended Love is truly love and that is a message I can get b I really want to read this book but I can t seem to find it anywhere
DNF at 45%Another book going to my Not likely to finish shelf.
The story started off on a bad note by bringing Lumen back I had hoped that she wouldn t be back again once the real story started I was wrong What pushed me over was Sines convoluted way of thinking Her constant acting like she doesn t want something, only to turn around and think that s exactly what I want Her over exaggerated insecurity, and her ability to see exactly what she s doing wrong, but does nothing to stop herself or fix things Oh and can we say hypocritical much I don t care how she sees things or works it out in her head, you can t sleep with someone else then get upset when the guy does the same Sorry honey, if you ve been spreading your legs for another man not once, but twice Your husband gets a pass for getting sucked off and not even liking it all that much.
75 starsOk, let s be honest All of us Venomous fans are total stalkers, we were crabby at Penelope for the delayed release and lack of updates, and we all knew the minute ThunderClaw was announced available for preorder or live, and we re all like So, this book had a great deal to live up to for most of us, not just in comparison to Venomous but due to the build up and wait I think this sort of situation can lead to skewed reviews because we judge based on comparison and emotional expectations I ll TRY not to be that way side note is it really fair to give a book a rating before it ever comes out because you re ticked off at the author for missing a release date come on, people that is not reviewing a book, that s venting end rant.
I had a difficult time getting into this book at the start, because I didn t identify with